Oh my Fuckin
Do you realize how annoying it is when you don’t switch paragraphs when a new character is speaking
Do you realize how confusing it is
I don’t care if they’re using one-word responses at each other, start a new damn paragraph.
ESPECIALLY IF YOU HAVE MORE THAN ONE CHARACTER.
First rule I learned as a writer, change the paragraph when a new character speaks. Otherwise things get confusing as hell.
How to be a Wrecker, by Wheeljack
mr. wheeljack is a genius ;u;
I have to deal with the aftereffects from him on a regular basis… and by afterefects I mean reattatching severed limbs… *grumbles*
"I love how in TFA we actually learn about the bots. They have their own life, their own problems and friends. I don’t love them because they’re extremely sexy mechs(I think I have a thing for ninjas…. Mmm Prowl….) I love them because I don’t think of them as an army, I think of them as real people. Because they are their own flawed, brilliant selves, with their own likes and dislikes, their own demons and angels. And that’s what makes them believable and loveable to me."
surprising i know
There are entire communities and social groups and experiences, stories, memories, etc in “white” countries without any white people too.
I long time ago I wrote a high school drama type of serial story about a social group that was mostly East Asian characters and one white character. I based it on my own HS experiences and people I knew. A lot of people liked it. But I showed it to a white friend of mine online, and she said she didn’t like it. I asked why, and she said it was “unrealistic” and racist. I asked why it was racist, and she said because most of the characters were Asian, there was only one white character and he was a side character, and she couldn’t associate with any of the mains because they weren’t white. My response was “turn on the television, welcome to my life.”
She said that was different though. That’s “realistic” and everybody can understand those characters. Even though my story wasn’t really any different except it was Asian people having teen drama, it was “unrealistic” because we all know social groups of Asian people don’t exist, and it’s racist because when you have mostly non-white people in a story, then it’s weird and strange, and white people are the “every person” who everybody can associate with, but non-white people are niche.
Well I guess it wouldn’t be my job if the cops weren’t called
wtf is your job
Ur what we in the scientific community call “a lil bitch”